Paper 2 - SHORT STORY
Writing a Mini Short Story
The FCE short story task probably poses two major problems. For some students who believe they lack creativity to invent stories, it is perhaps difficult to decide what to write about. For others, it is difficult to tell a story within the word limit.
To begin with, let’s de-mystify the task. You are not expected to write a story with full development of setting, plot and characters. You should remember that the purpose of the text is to entertain the reader. You may imagine you are taking part in a writing context or that your story will be published in a magazine. An anecdote dealing with just one episode worth telling will do.
Let’s see some guidelines
What is the expected language here?
It is important to have a good handling of tenses for the reader to follow the sequence of events. Try to vary your structures, you can use reported speech or quote some words from the characters to make it more vivid. Sentence length and punctuation require some thought, too.
Possible start & finish lines:
The instructions for this task usually include a start or finishing line for your story. You must not alter it. This line could be in the first or third person. Look at these past paper example:
I will never forget my first day at...
Write your story for the competition.
Source:
Between 120 to 180 words. Let’s say that 201 is too much!
To keep within the range of the word limit, you will probably have to focus on some of the many things involved in writing a story. How much to say about the place, time, characters and action are decisions you make at the planning stage. Choose what is more important to clearly picture the episode you want to narrate.
Here is the task analysis and writing guide from Cambridge ESOL. You will find rubric examples from past examinations together with the questions you need to ask yourself before planning your story. There are also some questions to help you structure your plan. It might be a good idea to print it and keep it at hand until you learn the writing steps.
http://www.cambridgeesol.org/teach/fce/writing/aboutthepaper/
part2/short.htm
In this second link, there are evaluation questions for the revision of your draft. They will help you to make adjustments to your story while keeping language and reader in mind!
http://www.cambridgeesol.org/teach/fce/writing/aboutthepaper/
part2/short_checklist.htm
To end this post here is a sample answer from one of my FCE students. The author tells me this story is fictional and not based on any true happening.
Your language school is running a short story competition. The story must begin or end with the following words:
I had never been so angry in my whole life.
Write your story in 120-180 words.
Author: Alicia
Note: I am transcribing the task as it was submitted to me without any of the language corrections.
I’d never been so angry in my whole life. 2005’s New Year reminds the worst evening I’ve ever spent.
I was flying to
My father was there. He seemed to have changed since the last time I had seen him. Although he was in his sixties, he kept on being an attractive man. We were just arriving at home when he gave me a marvellous piece of news. 'I'm engaged with a charming woman and I can't wait you meet her'.
As the song says: ‘The time goes by...', and fortunately my father recovered his common sense and that love story finished in a few months.
Some comments
Although a bit wordy (209), this is an interesting realisation of the task. It is quite challenging for a student to remember being angry and express it with clear and correct language. There are a few grammar mistakes, which do not interfere with communication at all. The writer has given enough details about the context to understand her own feelings and, at the same time, she has used varied structures and sentence length to keep the reader engaged. Paragraphs are well balanced and the story gets to a smooth ending.
Anyway, love is love, isn’t it? Just a thought.
http://www.britishcouncil.it/students/rome/FCEStories.htm
If you think you have written a story worth publishing, email it to me!
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3 Comments:
Hi!
I just took the FCE today and I think I might have written more than 180 words.
Do you know if the examiners punish this a LOT?
By Anonymous, At 7:45 pm
Probably not, Carolina. The mark is decided on the basis of your overall performance. If you sample is really good, a bit more than 180 words will be OK.
By Claudia Ceraso, At 12:35 am
Thank you so much!
:)
I hope my performance was OK.
:p
Bye!
By Anonymous, At 8:25 pm
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